[ By Aer-ki Jyr] Star Force: Origin Series Box Set (9-12) [antietam campaign Book] DOC


13 thoughts on “Star Force: Origin Series Box Set (9-12)

  1. says:

    First, there must be quite a Group of writers to keep up the tempo. I have started on book 13. The first novels are rather boring, it was mostly about training so I skipped a lot of pages. After the third novel the tempo increased tog

  2. says:

    Story is still kind of fun, but the pretensions are even sillier than before. The grammar and use of wrong words is far worse than before. I hear the Bard spinning in his grave over pre tell. The perfect tense is apparently unknown. Had went? Really? How about bowing one's head respectively? In respect to whom?

  3. says:

    So to start off, I give this book and this series as a while two stars.

    This series started reminiscent of the books Starship Troopers and the Forever War but then just lost the thread. The author while understanding physics doesn't have any experience with military personel, correct terminology, or the b

  4. says:

    Quite a story. Very enjoyable read. Sadly editing errors caused I would guess by an individual (or several) not doing their job. Rushing to get finished. It is irritating to me that when a job isn’t performed correctly, everyone else has to put the time & effort into doing their job which takes away enjoyment and raises the cost

  5. says:

    It is a good series, but the plot line moves kind of slow as he gets into a lot of detail. I sort of suspect he is milking the story line for all its worth to sell books. I like the story line so far. I am going to continue reading the series.

  6. says:

    This book has been well thought out by an author who seems to be well read. He is also able to form his charact

  7. says:

    But still needs a good proofreader and an editor's touch. Character development is shallow, but the stories are reasonably well developed. For what it is it's also overpriced. This is B level writing.

  8. says:

    So, with these books, a box set is about 300 pages total, give or take. I think the designation 9 12 may relate to sequential short stories published together as a book or something similar. Having said that, this set was actually very good. The story was interesting, flowed well, and presented a good story.

  9. says:

    Very well written and moves along at a good pace.
    The story is inspired and the archon's certainly do kick ass However
    I think that the books should be either longer or cheaper.
    I am enjoying the story but £3.99 is definitely on the high end of what they should cost. Perhaps a discount option on buying 2 or 3 at a time?

  10. says:

    The book continues the story well and now you know the characters is funny and has a good story line.

  11. says:

    Best in series so far

  12. says:

    A good space opera lots of reading and in some cases a bit too much detail about the wonders of exercising as a

  13. says:

    Great read, reccomend if you enjoy a great world building series, has a bit of everything.always a new unexpect

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Star Force: Origin Series Box Set (9-12)

Turn them to our advantage  And the one advantage we have is the repository of ancient knowledge left behind when our former masters abandoned Earth during a civil war They assume everyone died but a few human slaves remained and now we live only because of that mistake  But they didn't just make one Their second was leaving the most heavily defended and valuable building on the planet intact because destroying it along with the others when they bugged out would be too time consuming Instead they buried it and now we have limited access to the advanced technology and database inside From it we kno. It is a good series but the plot line moves kind of slow as he gets into a lot of detail I sort of suspect he is milking the story line for all its worth to sell books I like the story line so far I am going to continue reading the series

summary Star Force: Origin Series Box Set (9-12)

W the truth about our ancestry as well as the superhuman powers they laced into our genomeand because of those powers any human not under their direct control carries with them an automatic death sentence  So when we're found out we're all going to dieunless you and your team can grow into the war leaders we need figure out how to use the ancient technology as well as those who created it and find a way to do the impossible and overcome a galactic empire millions of years old An empire known as the V'kit'no'sat which Earth hilariously misinterpreted as a group of extinct animals called the Dinosaur. But still needs a good proofreader and an editor s touch Character development is shallow but the stories are reasonably well developed For what it is it s also overpriced This is B level writing

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Start as a RECRUITbecome a SUPER SOLDIERend up a GALACTIC WARLORD  Don your armor load up on ammo and get ready for your combat training You don't become a badass by signing on the dotted line you gotta earn it the hard waysame goes for your team You have to learn to fight how to work together and how to losefor the ancient origins of humanity on Earth are dark devastating and destined to return Earth is going to lose and lose badly when our time is up but out of the ashes of defeat we may be able to scrounge up a future if you and the other future warlords can learn how to overcome the losses and. So to start off I give this book and this series as a while two starsThis series started reminiscent of the books Starship Troopers and the Forever War but then just lost the thread The author while understanding physics doesn t have any experience with military personel correct terminology or the basic mindset of someone that fights for something The characters are flat have no motivation and we know nothing about them I am not even sure if there is a main characterNext we get into mindset the Archons do nothing but act as Mary Sue s to the authors content They can do anything and apparently working out 247 makes you immortal The Archons go through tough training that would never give them any useful knowledge they never train or utalize anything but Hollywood tactics and bad pop culture as a base for everything Not to mention everyone but themselves is incompetent and has never heard of overlapping fields of fire cover and basic common senseThen we get to the political side of things Apparently Star Force has an omniscient morality license China can and does kill thousands of men women and children but is given a slap on the wrist and it is never mentioned again The soldiers aren t hung for war crimes the general have nothing happen nothing but magic Mary Sue s with paintballs Then when there is an actual war between nation s that is just a bad rehash of WW2 everyone is evil When the conflict is being fought of sovereignty and the ability to defend ones self and ones propertyStar Force in all it s wisdom then decided that it doesn t like fighting which is it s main point of existence And decides that is is going to go full authoritarian and seize everyone s land stations and territory for violations This series could have been amazing but defended into minute over useless knowledge Mary Sue s and the message that the only way to advance the human race is via the subordination of the individual and all rights to an authorization few

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